The Subliminal Kid is one of my writers at
The BlackRage Organization. We're not sure if he's more
crazy or
brilliant, but we've got him and
we're proud of him. Here was his first
offering to the site a long time ago.
This does a much better job of
defining him than I could.
Fade In:
Exterior day:
Fish flopping in sand,
SURF is heard, shot held tight as fish
dies slowly for one minute
Pull back: fish in
desert on side of the hwy while
traffic whooshes by.
Interior car: Man puts
tape cassette in radio. Mans face is never revealed. (v.o.) "Congratulations on choosing to be informed on the proper procedures to
disposing of a dead body in your trunk. First you must prepare for----- '" Through windshield oncoming
motorcycle with
sidecar approaches.
Interior sidecar: Motorcyclist reaches for a
40-oz of beer picks it up and is
swilling it. Mans mouth finishing last of beer as he moves faster down the road.
Convertible approaches behind as motorcyclist BURPS, throws bottle
up in air behind him. Close up of
bottle spinning wildly against blue desert sky.
Interior convertible: man is drinking
a can of beer. He sees bottle
spinning his way over windshield; he swerves as bottle
strikes him, he loses control of the car. It flips onto side of road.
Man is dying as everything slowly blackens.
Lucid